The Effect of Climate Change
One of the effects of climate
change is that the way of people’ lives in a small island could be threatened. First
of all, getting high temperatures have a climactic affect Arctic ice; for example,
Handwerk (2004) states “since 1978, Arctic sea ice area has shrunk by some 9
percent per decade and has thinned as well”. This shows that melting ice has
flowed into Arctic sea, and it makes the sea levels rise. For example, Kakissis
(2010) explains that a small island such as Bangladesh situated only a couple
of meters aloft on sea level and is customarily assailed by cyclones and floods.
This demonstrates that some disasters triggered by climate change could put
people’s lives in danger. After that, the grate number of people have to move
the city as environmental refugees; moreover, “rapid and unplanned urbanization
is expected to put even further strains on scarce water, energy and food
resources” Kakissis (2010) says. In conclusion, the climate change could cause
melting ice, rising sea levels, and it makes people in a small island expel
from their villages; consequently, it cause a lack of some resources.
<References>
l Brian Handwerk. “Global Warming Fast Facts.” National Geographic News,
NationalGeographic.com, December 6, 2004
l Joanna Kakissis. “Environmental Refugees Unable to Return Home”, January
3, 2010 http://www.nytimes.com/2010/01/04/world/asia/04migrants.html?pagewanted=2
You have some good information here but there is a problem with your quotation sandwiches: They run into one another. Look at this example, "This shows that melting ice has flowed into Arctic sea, and it makes the sea levels rise. For example, Kakissis (2010) explains that a small island such as Bangladesh situated only a couple of meters aloft on sea level and is customarily assailed by cyclones and floods.". Your 'comment' for one quote and the 'idea' of the other quote are the same. However, they do not really go together. 85
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