Response for Innovations for the Developing World
One point that the author mentions is Sling
shot that is Kamen’s water-cleaning machine could grow developing countries. This
is suitable for these countries because it’s not complicated and efficient. First,
people in poor countries are likely to drink dirty water, and they catch
disease. However, Slingshot make them stay healthy to get clean and safe water.
In addition, it could provide them business opportunity. As using example of
Grameen Phone, people are supplied loans to use Slingshot, and they can earn by
selling clean water; therefore, their stand of living could be higher. Lastly,
using slingshot is reasonable compare to setting up big water system because everyone
can use it easily, and only dirty water is needed to extract. In conclusion, it
is useful for developing countries to utilize Slingshot because of health,
business opportunity and reasonableness; thus, they should accept Kamen’s
invention.
Good work here. You have provided some really specific details that support your ideas. One note here; be careful of your use of negatives. For example, "because it’s not complicated and efficient" makes it sound like both adjectives are "not".
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